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Horny Hump Day is a blog hop where established and budding authors share three erotic sentences from their work. I hope you’ll hop around to their sites and take a look at their scribblings. I know I’m going to!

I’ll share a little more from my current WIP, Bourbon & Branch Water, with you this week. I probably shouldn’t–it’s unedited–but I’m going to do it anyway. I can’t guarantee that this particular segment will make it into the final draft. (You’ll have to read the published book to find out!)

Native American WomanStormy is remembering her night of passion with Jeff. It makes her uncomfortable to think she jumped in bed with the handsome guy—she’s not a one-night-stand kinda girl—but the memory excites her all over again.

His cock was so hard in her hand, so heavy against her palm, and his lips were so warm and sensual on her face, her ears, her throat. Oh God, when he suckled on her nipple she arched against him because she couldn’t help it. Stormy wanted to be closer to him, to touch his body everywhere, to crawl into his skin and make herself a part of him.

I can really get into her desire to be connected to him so deeply. Can you? Have you ever wanted to be so integrated with another person?

Thank you for joining me for Horny Hump Day this week. I encourage you to look around this site. There are free short stories and lots of excerpts, blurbs, trailers, and character profiles. Have fun!

7 Comments

  1. Love the strong voice that is in this snippet; had me wanting to read more :o)

  2. very torrid snippet this week. very visual. drew me right in.

  3. Very hot selection. I’ve never had that pleasure. This piece makes me wish to experience that. It also hinted that she might have more feelings for him than just a nice time in bed.

  4. Very sexy and intense! I felt like that sometimes before I fell out of love with my so-called fiancé, the only lover I’ve had to date.

  5. Another really hot excerpt, Trish. Well done!

  6. Very sensual nibble, Patricia. And yes, I can feel her longing for that connection. Desire comes in many forms. Fantastic three!

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